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faithmairee
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since 2011-01-05
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Poe Haven, USA

0 posted 2011-03-13 12:08 PM



once i was somebody's wife
but things didn't turn out right
i never thought i was real domesticated
but when it was all over
i was most certainly educated on the
evil ways a man can be
i still believe in love
though the scars he left went deep


my life is changed but
my truest love is still writing poetry
so when someone says
something i wrote has made them smile
it touches my heart very deeply
perhaps i have helped
them even in a small way to go on


writing is part of
my soul's work and i will write until
the day that i take my last breath
i write not for my
ego's sake but for a much higher purpose
because my greatest wish
is that i might leave the world
a better place by sharing
a part of my soul's stirrings

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

© Copyright 2011 Faith Elizabeth Brigham - All Rights Reserved
katahdin
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since 2010-07-01
Posts 1196
ME. In the Shadow of the Mt.
1 posted 2011-03-13 12:50 PM


Nicely done! One of my true loves too!
Kat >^..^<

Richy
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since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050

2 posted 2011-03-13 01:25 AM



That is so sweet of you Faith!

I just write for ego, but then I'm conceited and selfish, hey what can I say?!

What! The mic was still on?!?!?

Hey that last part was a totalll faleshood... where is the sound director, someone is going to pay for this... ;P


Wonderful Faith!

2islander2
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since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825
by the sea
3 posted 2011-03-13 05:26 AM


hello Mairee, love is an essantial branch, not the tree, we need so much other things to live, friends or litterature or writing, and so many things...Thanks for the lovely words and truths that touched me.

yann

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana
4 posted 2011-03-13 08:13 AM


We all write for different reasons, Faith, but most of us write because of the need to communicate to like-minded poets, and yes, to use their literary shoulder to cry on from time to time. I liked this one.

~ My grandmother is over eighty and still doesn't need glasses. Drinks right out of the bottle. ~

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215
Realms of Light
5 posted 2011-03-13 01:46 PM


Spoken ~ and written ~ like a true poet!
Very much enjoyed! ~ and I can identify with your sentiments! ~ All of them! (I once was married as well!)

"because my greatest wish
is that i might leave the world
a better place by sharing
a part of my soul's stirrings"

~ Your wish is a dream in the making, dear poetess with soul.

Love & Poet Light,
EA

Word Weaver
Member
since 2011-03-06
Posts 437
California, USA
6 posted 2011-03-13 02:05 PM


Always write for yourself and from your heart and success is yours.


Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115
South Africa
7 posted 2011-03-13 02:50 PM


Keep on writing, Faith.  Words do travel when they come from the heart - and the heart is more powerful than the mind.  

Helen

faithmairee
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since 2011-01-05
Posts 1441
Poe Haven, USA
8 posted 2011-03-13 10:59 PM


i am honored by your wonderful remarks...thank you all so much

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

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