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Word Weaver
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0 posted 2011-03-12 01:19 PM



Winding roads through miles
of land where no man
has cut down trees
to build his dwelling so fine.

Feeling as though no one
has ever walked here before
virgin land untrod
by man in his quest for adventure.

There’s peace to be found here
where wildlife still roam freely
amongst tall pines,
in shady valleys.

Chancing upon a trickling brook
pausing to wonder
to where it travels,
from whence it came.

The air is pure and
cleanses the senses
as I listen to the quiet
a sound unlike any other.

Back into the world endowed
with a different perspective
a deeper insight creating a longing
for more of that which is as yet unspoiled.


© Copyright 2011 Marcia Miller-Twiford - All Rights Reserved
Sunshine
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1 posted 2011-03-12 07:35 PM


I am bespoken to a man who
had, and has such land...
virgin, for the most part
in its origin...or so I am
told.

But I have to be honest...in the
first 160 that was sold?

Heartbreak.


Word Weaver
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2 posted 2011-03-12 07:40 PM


Hi, I don't understand this part of your comment:

But I have to be honest...in the
first 160 that was sold?


Earth Angel
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3 posted 2011-03-13 05:43 PM


Dear Weaver of Words, I yearn for such an unspoiled place that I could call my own. In fact, that is one of my favourite nighttime dreams! I imagine myself in a place exactly as you have so perfectly described and living off the land in quiet reverie with Nature.

Thoroughly enjoyed!


EA

twistedpup
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4 posted 2011-03-13 07:55 PM


that was a great write wow, im impressed.

*hugs*

OwlSA
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5 posted 2011-03-14 11:14 AM


You write of my world and for a moment, I was there.  Thank you.

Owl

Marchmadness
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6 posted 2011-03-20 03:00 AM


Sounds wonderful to me, WordWeaver.
                                Ida

Bastet
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7 posted 2011-03-20 04:10 AM


Word Weaver is very apt. This is an exquisite tapestry of some wonderful place that I would like to visit. Is it in California? You express the sense of peace so well that it is tangible. Bravo!
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