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Karleygirl
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0 posted 2011-03-12 03:21 AM


So, Once upon a time there was a girl named Carley and a guy named Brandon.... Carley and Brandon were best friends, and they never could imagine ever being in a fight... After time Carley fell inlove with Brandon. And brandon started to like carley, too.. the only problem was, he was already with a girl... Carley Promised Brandon that she'll wait for him... forever if she had to, just so he could be her.... No body wants to wait forever, though... And she got tired of waiting... She waited in the heat of the summer.... She waited When the trees left their branches.... she waited Behind a fireplace in the cold winter.... and she knew, that someday maybe he'd be with her...Time went by.... More than a year... And Brandon asked Carley to a date... and he made a huge scene, You could see in her eyes that she was fighting back tears of joy... Trying to make her voice sound normal she said, "Yes!" And kissed him... They were together for 4 days and then problems started... She was dieing inside because of him... They broke up on day 5... And Carley was barley getting by.... Her heart was hurting so much it felt like she was dragging a huge, dead stone in her chest... Then brandon came back...Carley was still Inlove with brandon at the time brandon asked her out again.... She hesitated... but of course, she said yes.... They broke up again on day 3... and she was completly broken... Brandon was mad at her... And Carley ended up without a best friend and without a boyfriend...Brandon got a lung problem and nearly died... And Carley wasn't allowed to see him or even hear from him... He didn't know if He was even alive... And she spend 2 months crying... She learned Brandon was ok..But that time... She was over him for good... But Carley never learned to trust for a long time...
That was until A beautiful guy Named Jake came along... at first, they were friends... Funny thing is, There were crushing on each other the whole time... Carley asked Jake out... But he declined... He didn't want to ruin their friendship...Carley was amazed... Everything, Every characteristic about him was amazing... carley sees him perfectly... all the time she thought about him... Jake was True... and Carley almost burst out crying when she thought this whole story... Could have been different... if only she had said no to brandon... If only that would have happen...  and If you haven't guessed That girl is me.....v.v

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