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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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it wasn't your new car smell or how you were built for going faster and that your curves were not fragile it was more the comfortable perhaps how you parked your lovely there at the curb side of my glacing mind and then just let yourself idle I imagine purring would be accurate but you didn't leave any sounds just that take a test drive hello to see if I could keep you on the pavement and not get you too dirty, too soon I didn't bother looking at your fingers to see if you were already preowned or leased perhaps, since I had decided when you were not looking, I would steal you ______________ daark |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
smiles A |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I don't think I could even be sold for parts. Bring a tow truck? http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QTP3ScWi7rc (I might have hit you with that one before, so it's apparently not really the last chance Texaco. I'll try to make the last Last Chance Texaco, tho.) I definitely needed this tune-up, lovie.  |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I hear some keys jangling...   |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Sports car red - and gold? Owl |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms ali-san, thanks little car salesperson.. __________________ ms serene..I imagine your warranty is priceless...but worth it...thanks babe ________________________ ms sun...keyless entry..hehe thanks lady ________ lady owl....I like the more comfortable land limo type. Thanks for the eyes lady friend |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Haha, oh man Dark your stuff is so good it sometimes it makes me chuckle in delight... everytime I read you I hear Sam Elliot reading it in that low deliberate voice of his... I liked the beginning but the end here was pretty great: "just that take a test drive hello to see if I could keep you on the pavement and not get you too dirty, too soon I didn't bother looking at your fingers to see if you were already preowned or leased perhaps, since I had decided when you were not looking, I would steal you" sigh wheel drive huh? hecks yeah...  |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
I really like your play on words within the poetry you give us to read. I am never dissatisfied. ~ After twelve years of therapy my psychiatrist said something that brought tears to my eyes. He said, "No hablo ingles." ~ |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
I can't believe it...Alison had the exact comment (at one word) that I had planned to offer...so how's this...much smiles |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Wow, Harleys and limos - unlikely combination - but then who wants to be predictable? When I was married (a thousand years ago) I had a 1981 MGA sports car - which was sports car red - VERY seldom put the top up, only when it rained in winter (and even then, not always). Owl |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Rich....thank you my friend _____________ Jp, thanks amigo ________________ steavenr, thank you for coming in here and reading this _________________ lady owl...I can only imagine you topless...grin..thanks lady |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Aww D~ that's the way to a girls heart, get her comfortable and she'll drive to the end of earth. What a fine ride you wrote~ Steal away!! |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
babyblue... some kind of sweet limo you are too babe!!thanks |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Oh ...! Sighing and smiling along ... Purr..fect! Love, Margherita |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Just had to come back one more time. You make me insatisable for more.  A |
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Bastet Member
since 2010-05-07
Posts 246 |
Wonderful metaphor! Very cleverly expressed. Would a woman have thought of this? Anyway, I really enjoyed the read. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms mar, thank you sweet lady friend... ___________________ ms ali-san...I adore an insatiable woman...but you are sexy in a jeep. Thanks babe _____________ friend bastet, I suspect several women conjure long lean powerful stallion like sports cars into their minds and imagine driving them deep into the furrows of their fantasy highways...thanks for the read |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Oh, you clever, naughty boy! Personally, I am a sleek Ferrari ~ but with a very comfortable ride! Earthy |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms EA...my kind of curve bender!! Thanks lady friend |
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