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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere 
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Trust is a fickle fascination built on pastry thin layers on memories buried deep beyond our conscience recollecting until coincidences, scents, sounds and too, too déjà vu surface feelings triggered doubts superimposing themselves over the reality that sometimes trust comes with extenuating circumstances LGR©3/8/11 |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wow, never thought of it quite that way but yeah that's pretty cool |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Thanks, I was kinda holding my breath on this one...I'm so glad you "got it".  Lori |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Yep, and sometimes those "extenuating" circumstances direct you the wrong way. I like the phrase you used to describe trust, Lori: "built on pastry thin layers." There is a lot to you that remains untapped, my friend. ~ Your writing is one of my guilty pleasures...more art than just words.-- steavenr ~ |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Well thanks Jerry, and you are so right about the wrong way (and you don't even know why) Good to have you here Lori |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
Trust does indeed seem to be built on 'pastry thin layers' ... effectively put ... well 'penned' ! |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
It can be pastry thin sometimes can't it Lori, kind of like a, what have you done for me lately type of thing to make yourself trustworthy or otherwise. Trust, is fickle, but then so are we in general aren't we. This is a very good topic and you wrote about it well, it gave me much to ponder and thats always good isn't it. "that sometimes trust comes with extenuating circumstances" haha... that is brilliant! Well, well, done! Richard |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
secondhanddreampoet- Thank you so much, I appreciate it very much. ____________________________________________ Richy-thanks for using the word "brilliant" I'm going to choose to believe that all day Lori |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Indeed very well penned, Lori - and "brilliant" - Yes, believe it! Helen |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Bless your heart Helen, you are a sweetie!  Lori |
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