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Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

0 posted 2011-03-07 08:09 AM

The warm hands of devotion
that my parents hold
so sweetly entwine
Fingers of forever
seeking their
beloved's warmth

You are my beloved warmth

I feel that warmth with you
Every bit the man
good as my Dad
Because I know
you love me
like that too
and that I
will always
love you

faithmairee
Senior Member

since 2011-01-05

Posts 1441
Poe Haven, USA

1 posted 2011-03-07 10:21 AM

this is a very beautiful and heart-felt write...great poem, Lori

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

2 posted 2011-03-07 10:35 AM

Thanks Faith, I do so appreciate your words and presence here.

Lori

faithmairee
Senior Member

since 2011-01-05

Posts 1441
Poe Haven, USA

3 posted 2011-03-07 12:22 PM

Lori, You are most welcome! You are a true pleasure to read.

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

Word Weaver
Member

since 2011-03-06

Posts 437
California, USA

4 posted 2011-03-07 04:06 PM

Very lovely poem Lori. The world would be a better place if everyone could have that kind of love.

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

5 posted 2011-03-07 04:10 PM

I'm very fortunate, too bad it took 3 trys to get it right. Thank you
Lori

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

6 posted 2011-03-07 05:31 PM

This is beautiful. I especially like the correlation between your father and your man. That makes it quite special, Lori.

~ I think part of a best friend's job should be to immediately clear your computer history if you die ~

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

7 posted 2011-03-07 06:23 PM

Enjoyed...James

steavenr
Member Elite

since 2003-11-17

Posts 4058

8 posted 2011-03-07 08:54 PM

the beautiful essence of this write is "You are my beloved warmth" and...you've done it justice...thoroughly enjoyed

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

9 posted 2011-03-08 09:31 AM

Jerry, James, and Steaven--
Thank you for your attention to this poem. It is ironic that he doesn't realize my love poems to him are some of my most popular.
Lori

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