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Fly by Night
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Fly by Night |
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Nareena Member
since 2011-02-17
Posts 51BC, Canada |
We argued again today I ended up crying. Repeatedly. You think I'm selfish... I think you're selfish... who isn't selfish in the bottom of the soul? Elders counsel say things will get better. Eventually. I think I'm doing all I can... you think you're doing all you can... when is "all we can" enough? I worked out my anger sweated out the pain. I feel good. Rational. Maybe one day we'll go to bed unstressed. But not tonight |
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EmmaRose Senior Member
since 2011-03-02
Posts 1376Midwest |
The feeling of being unsettled comes through most vividly here. |
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faithmairee Senior Member
since 2011-01-05
Posts 1441Poe Haven, USA |
i can really relate to this poem...nice work  There must be a poem in here somewhere. |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Deep down we all have to look out for ourselves, who else is really going to... but Nareena my friend, I have a feeling that you're not selfish... thats not the feeling I've gotten from your comments to others here... you keep working it out, nothing worth having is ever going to come easy. Enjoyed this! |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
I hope it all works out for you and the stress level drops on both accounts. Sometimes, however, when you've done all you think you can do . . . I'm rooting for you. ~ After twelve years of therapy my psychiatrist said something that brought tears to my eyes. He said, "No hablo ingles." ~ |
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Spiros Zafiris Senior Member
since 2002-10-20
Posts 982Canada |
..at least you created a poem; it relieves one's stress level; wish you happier days ..>>spiros |
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