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Huan Yi
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since 2004-10-12
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Waukegan

0 posted 2011-03-04 11:01 AM


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There are as yet
No leaves on the trees

In long coats
With their collars up
We walk in the park
A dim sun in a gray sky
Just above the sea

You say
It’s been a long time

So many years
Have passed away
And still it’s as if
It was just
The other day

Your fingers together
Twisting a sodden
Handkerchief
In the cold spring rain


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Juju
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since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429
In your dreams
1 posted 2011-03-04 11:08 AM


I really like this one

-Juju

-"So you found a girl
Who thinks really deep thoughts
What's so amazing about really deep thoughts " Silent all these Years, Tori Amos

Huan Yi
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since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688
Waukegan
2 posted 2011-03-04 12:29 PM


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Thanks Juju


John


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Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California
3 posted 2011-03-04 01:40 PM


Paints a sad but very beautiful picture of longing.
               Ida

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