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Huan Yi
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0 posted 2011-03-03 10:21 AM


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Mary Jo
No longer beautiful
Mop in one hand


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JerryPat2
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1 posted 2011-03-04 08:37 AM


Perfect visual.

~ Never did I feel more devoted to my wife than after biting the wild garlic of treachery ~

easy1
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2 posted 2011-03-16 04:52 PM


Yes, I concur, it is.

"I am become Time, the Destroyer of all." And yet from habit one finds the washing of dishes by hand to be looked forward to, perhaps, however, not as much so as the hoped-for pleasures and opportunities of Heaven.

Marchmadness
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3 posted 2011-04-03 03:42 PM


I guess Mary Jo and the mop are beautiful to the dirty floor.
                              Ida

JerryPat2
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4 posted 2011-04-03 04:40 PM


Ain't nuttin' beautiful about a mop. Maybe Mary Jo retains more than she thinks, sometimes it's all in the mind.

~ If you don't want gays in the military, make the uniforms ugly. ~

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