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faithmairee
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since 2011-01-05
Posts 1441
Poe Haven, USA

0 posted 2011-03-02 11:36 PM



where are all the
long gone beautiful people
i went to rallies with
hated my parents with
locked lips with
and lstened to
janis joplin with?

where are all the
long gone lets-be-real
beautiful people that
were so cool and never
minded other peoples driving
or second hand smoke too much
who when they looked around saw
each other as brothers and sisters?

maybe they weren't
really all that beautiful
and just maybe lots of them
aren't even alive anymore
but still i miss the love-beaded
faded blue jean let's-get-down
and funky days when we still
knew how to trust one another
and most of all stuck togeher

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

© Copyright 2011 Faith Elizabeth Brigham - All Rights Reserved
Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere
1 posted 2011-03-03 08:39 AM


Where are they now? Good question.  The answer will surprise you...find them and you will see. Liked this!
Lori

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
2 posted 2011-03-07 06:22 PM


Nice writing...I believe they are all in politics right now...James
serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738

3 posted 2011-03-07 06:32 PM


I happen to know there's a bunch of 'em hanging out in that virtual reality game called "Second Life".

(I go there from time to time when I feel like dancin'.)

Both you and Jerry are tuned in to my "whatever" happened to mood today. Occasionally I do run into one or two of 'em and sometimes it's nice, but most times? *wince*

So I quit Facebook. and *shrug*

Thanks for keeping me company.

Misty Lilacs
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since 2005-11-15
Posts 1060
White Birch Forest
4 posted 2011-03-07 07:48 PM


Oh, I believe they are still around. Some have gone to greener pastures, some became the preps of the world but some still exist in places like Vermont and New Hampshire.

Great write. I enjoyed it and it brought lots of memories flooding back.

ooxx  Marti

I do the MS Walk everyday!!

steavenr
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since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058

5 posted 2011-03-07 08:30 PM


seems that the "long gone beautiful people" that I once knew (all of us were going to 'blow that Popsicle joint' we all grew up in and then change the world) seemed to have returned from Dreamland and are once again back at start just holding the stick...I just can't bring myself to return to Go (I seem to be stuck on the Chance space just before Free Parking) ...maybe I will roll doubles this time...
faithmairee
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since 2011-01-05
Posts 1441
Poe Haven, USA
6 posted 2011-03-09 07:45 PM


Thank you all for your lovely comments.  I enjoyed them all.

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

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