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twistedpup
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since 2011-02-25
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0 posted 2011-03-02 08:13 PM



The guy we like, does he like us?
That one thing we forgot to do,
was it really that important?
Why cant i sleep?
Who am i?
Are we going to meet tonight?
Will he text me?
Does he see more then the physical?
Do my feelings matter or am i just waisting my breath?
Should i kiss him or will he kiss me?
Am i doing every thing right?
What is life with out love?
Is there ever a time we dont love?
Do soulmates have to be two peaple that are in a relationship?
How many answers will this poem receive?

*hugs*

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steavenr
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1 posted 2011-03-03 01:24 AM


All I can say after reading this very provocative write is that I am so glad those days are so very behind me I would never, ever have had a relationship if I had to deal with all those questions (it was a simpler time...for sure)  You know, God had not yet invented knees ...fire was on the new creations list...and new shoes were put on horses (we were still painting our feet black and lacing up our toes)
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