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Open Poetry #47

night time rondevu

twistedpup
Member

since 2011-02-25

Posts 115

0 posted 2011-03-01 07:11 PM

leaving at six fourty seven
just after the text
dusk
we meet in the parking lot
lock one car,
leave in the other
drive out of town,
together.
Go to the place,
just across from the water.
midnight rondevu
we start by talking.
small talk i guess,
then we kiss.
we're both nervous
we've never done this.
the sun has set,
no lights around us
the car is off.
our eyes reveal a deep hunger.
We get a little closer
its just after ten
we must part ways
knowing this will probably,
happen again.
nighttime rondevu

*hugs*

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

1 posted 2011-03-02 10:00 PM

Enjoyed...James

faithmairee
Senior Member

since 2011-01-05

Posts 1441
Poe Haven, USA

2 posted 2011-03-03 12:34 PM

nice write...i enjoyed it!

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

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