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gdcod3player
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since 2009-09-13
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California

0 posted 2011-03-01 12:13 PM


Dont give me that horrifying speech
Leave me with the holes
Send me a letter with what i should say
Throw me away like there was nothing
Shoot me with a diamond bullet
Everything is breaking down
Let my world crumble until you speak
I want to know why you threw me away
Give me all the answers
All the hours of the day
Let me count the time until there is nothing
My soul has been your slave
My heart is red
Let me talk again somehow
You know what ill say
"my heart is roaring
let it show you im back"
I wish i could hold you forever
I wish you would let me sleep
I've been listening softly
I've let you slip away
Let my heart bleed
Ive been dying since you left me
Let me hold you in my eyes
Let me speak

© Copyright 2011 Jared Copeland - All Rights Reserved
serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738

1 posted 2011-03-01 01:04 AM


I feel like I just rode a very seriously tall wave...

intense!

(I like intense)

enjoyed

steavenr
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since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058

2 posted 2011-03-02 10:34 AM


been there...thought that...nice write
2islander2
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since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825
by the sea
3 posted 2011-03-02 12:12 PM


been there too, I wish it never happens again, thanks for the poignant , moving and superb write...

change your mind
try to forget
the treacherous girl (or boy)
park your car
in front of a museum
and visit artful people,
there are unknown
eyes
to open yours again.

yann

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