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Juju
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0 posted 2011-02-28 10:49 PM


The Sticky Truth About Forgiveness


The epicenter of a spider web
Entangles disturbances like flies
While the tidal wave of time goes by

Now each movement I make is restrained
By the silky, sticky thread made of lies

Even though I knew who he was beneath
The grandeur of haunted mysticism
I still flew toward the danger head first


Juju

-Juju

-"So you found a girl
Who thinks really deep thoughts
What's so amazing about really deep thoughts " Silent all these Years, Tori Amos

[This message has been edited by Juju (03-02-2011 09:03 PM).]

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JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
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1 posted 2011-02-28 10:56 PM


Isn't that the way it usually works? It seems we gravitate toward danger when we are seeking a lover, because of what we conceive of our own dull, uninspired lives. It doesn't usually take too long for us to understand that what seemed so exciting is actually a prison and we are looking out trhough the bars we have built ourselves.

~ Never did I feel more devoted to my wife than after biting the wild garlic of treachery ~

2islander2
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since 2008-03-12
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by the sea
2 posted 2011-03-01 08:38 AM


Hello Juju, I guess we all do same mistakes, that lessons of past we forget and go the head first as soon as we can...Thanks for sharing such beautiful verses and graceful message.

yann

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