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twistedpup
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since 2011-02-25
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0 posted 2011-02-28 12:04 PM



You've left tread marks from the start.
your smile is a like a battery charger,
when it maks my stomach flutter.
Your voice is like a well tuned engine
with a soft per.
When you hold me, your touch is warm,
like the hood of a car in summer.
Your eys glisten like headlights,
they make for a not so dark night.

Number 91 is who you are,
now if you werent already real
you would be my dream car.


*hugs*

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faithmairee
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since 2011-01-05
Posts 1441
Poe Haven, USA
1 posted 2011-02-28 07:01 PM


i think you just described my car perfectly...enjoyed your poem

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

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