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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2011-02-27 07:07 PM


Every Now and Then

Every now and then
I have to ask myself;
James, what do you want,
and if I were to answer myself
I'd tell myself this...
What I desire, what I need,
what I want...is a woman that
wants to be with me as much
as I want to be with her.
What I want...is for that particular
woman to be ready and willing
for a relationship.
Not too much to
ask is it?

JamesLee
27February
2011


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1 posted 2011-02-27 09:21 PM


Any answer I have is fllled with cliches.  Doesn't seem to be too much at all - they say when we give up, we get what we were looking for.  So I have heard.

Like this one too, JM.

A

secondhanddreampoet
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2 posted 2011-02-27 09:25 PM


fair question ...

but, good luck with that one!

faithmairee
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3 posted 2011-02-28 07:07 PM


i really like this one...I love your ending question...i've asked myself that very question as it relates to men...nice work

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

ethome
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4 posted 2011-03-01 01:47 AM


You're not the only one with that wish James there's millions.
It's not too much to ask.

Eric

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2islander2
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5 posted 2011-03-01 08:36 AM


Hi James, this is quite good and fair, Enjoyed your vision and romance.

yann

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