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graying1
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0 posted 2011-02-27 01:53 PM


Oh my aching toe
slipped on the ice jamming it
ouch, at least I didn’t fall
hit the step then darning it
my hands full of food
it’s my weather toe you know
aches before a summer storm
or on deep cold days,
but now it just aches
poor toe


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Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!
1 posted 2011-02-27 02:00 PM


Poor toe.  I am making a "boo boo" face for you.  Hope that weather toe feels better soon.

Alison

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Member Rara Avis
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2 posted 2011-02-27 02:07 PM


Ouch! Better get that weather toe back in shape. I think we have more "interesting" weather coming.
                                Ida

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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3 posted 2011-02-28 04:03 PM


it is times like these that one is glad they didn't have their foot in their mouth--coulda broke a tooth LOL!
Lori

ethome
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since 2000-05-14
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4 posted 2011-02-28 04:12 PM


Take care of that toe and treat it with kindness so it won't react on you.
Hope you're going to be OK

Eric

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5 posted 2011-02-28 04:22 PM


Maybe you should call a toe truck??
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