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Open Poetry #47

A New Beginning

martiniat8
Senior Member

since 2003-06-21

Posts 897
Prague, Bohemia, Czech Republic

0 posted 2011-02-27 06:55 AM

I could write with words such as...
On petal fields, I have fallen
landed into a bed of daisies

I could write...
a few weeks after being thrown from the tower
exiled, betrayed, heart ripped open, and thrown away
now find passion and sparks...

hmmm, but thats not right either
and it's not the truth

there are no noddings, nor duck and dive
from cupids arrows being slung my way
there is no piercing feeling, no love stuck swoon
no melting, no feeling of woo

It's just...

It's just, I look into her eyes
and everything that happened before
does not matter...
anymore

It is chemistry in a different kind of way
it is a look that washes away

a new beginning

and all I can think of is
I want to make new memories with you
I want to be with you

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

1 posted 2011-02-27 07:14 AM

thanks martiniat for the superb loving words, ilike the chemistry of the poem until the fianl message...Thanks for the very enjoyable read.

yann

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

2 posted 2011-02-27 01:58 PM

I hope you do make new (good) memories with her. I like this one and know I'll be back to read it again.

Alison

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