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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2011-02-24 05:09 PM




Wanting Her

I wanted her
to seduce me
in high heels
and a sexy dress,
I wanted to be
in her bedroom
whispering in her ear
"I'll help you to undress."

JamesLee
19February
2011


  


  


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JerryPat2
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1 posted 2011-02-24 05:24 PM


Well, are you going to continue this line of poetry and give up the goodies in the next poem, or are we going to have to fantasize?

~ Life is sexually transmitted ~

latearrival
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2 posted 2011-02-24 09:26 PM


I love your love stories or fantasies. laterrival
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3 posted 2011-02-26 12:44 PM


Very, very nice, James.  Sexy nice.

A

2islander2
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4 posted 2011-02-26 03:53 AM


what a beautiful message, loving words and precious feelings...I enjoyed a lot.

yann

ethome
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5 posted 2011-02-26 09:52 AM


Well, don't think you're the Lone Ranger on that one!
Direct and well expressed James.

Eric

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Margherita
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6 posted 2011-02-26 09:57 AM


You dreamy romantic!

Smiling at Eric's reply  

Love,
Margherita

sim0riah
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7 posted 2011-02-27 11:03 AM


Nice one James!
Enjoyed
Rich

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