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Open Poetry #47

My Desire your Delight

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2011-02-22 09:10 PM

My Desire your Delight

If you were
my sweetheart
I'd kiss you every
morning and sleep
in your arms
every night.
You would be
my desire
and I would be
your delight.

JamesLee
18February
2011

katahdin
Senior Member

since 2010-07-01

Posts 1196
ME. In the Shadow of the Mt.

1 posted 2011-02-22 09:44 PM

Cute poem, loved the rhymes.
Kat >^..^<

To live is to love
To love is to live

faithmairee
Senior Member

since 2011-01-05

Posts 1441
Poe Haven, USA

2 posted 2011-02-22 10:47 PM

very romasntic and nicely written

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

ken206573
Member

since 2008-10-14

Posts 487

3 posted 2011-02-23 07:23 PM

I always enjoy your poems they are delightful.

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

4 posted 2011-02-24 10:18 AM

A perfect match to dream of, dear James!

Love,
Margherita

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

5 posted 2011-02-24 10:23 AM

so cute and romantic, enjoyed it.

yann

bel1e
Senior Member

since 2006-07-24

Posts 1631

6 posted 2011-02-24 10:27 AM

how lovely is that

Nareena
Member

since 2011-02-17

Posts 51
BC, Canada

7 posted 2011-02-26 01:08 AM

Enjoyed the depth in this "simple" love poem

Thank you for the read

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

8 posted 2011-02-26 02:26 AM

You leave me with a smile and I am off to bed with this in my head.

You are smooth.

A

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