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Open Poetry #47

My breath in the night

spiked
Senior Member

since 2000-01-13

Posts 873
Hammond, La USA

0 posted 2011-02-22 01:57 AM

My breath in the night
Leave smoke in the light
From the chill that I break with my heat
The fire that burns
Inside as I turn
You soft as you lie
in my arms
The tingles you feel
The sounds that I steal
From a body I've taken control.
Wearing you thin
My thoughts on some whim
Leave you no chance to squirm out.
Of that passionate hold
That bears me you soul
Surrenders your need to believe.
That all that I am
Is never a plan
But freedom from all you have seen
And yet you still need more

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

1 posted 2011-02-22 03:23 AM

Very interesting and intimate piece of writing Richard.
I could get the picture real well.

Eric

oxymoron....Rap Music

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