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spiked
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since 2000-01-13
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Hammond, La USA

0 posted 2011-02-22 01:48 AM


When the night has passed
And the daylight comes
As we sit in wait
For the morning sun
To tell me all will be alright
To help me see some guiding
Right.
Where a smile that comes from deep within
Bring out those stains that blind and dim
Wash from this view
The blurring past
Bring forth the way
To make it last
Beyond this morning light I feel
As if there is some reprieve
From the pains.that I conceal
And send a smile, a laugh to say
That I am strong and here to stay
Beyond when this night has passed
And daylight comes again

© Copyright 2011 Richard Rendall - All Rights Reserved
easy1
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since 2010-05-22
Posts 1209
Southeastern USA
1 posted 2011-02-22 02:42 PM


A good read.
serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738

2 posted 2011-02-22 04:44 PM


You didn't happen to be at The Famous Door Saturday night, were you?

I saw someone who resembled you, but didn't say hello since my eyes some times see ghosts.

In any case, it's great to see you HERE, again.

Enjoying the journey through your words.

spiked
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since 2000-01-13
Posts 873
Hammond, La USA
3 posted 2011-02-22 07:58 PM


thank you easy, seren wasn't at the famous door would have come to see you doll.hope all is well
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