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OwlSA
Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa
0 posted 2011-02-21 11:20 AM


CHUCKLE COMFORT
18 February 2011

How it swarms the cockles
and small marine crustaceans
(alive-alive-O)
of the cardio-vascular arrangement,
to hear a pedigree chuckle
that emanates from the toes
and spreads like weeds
to the topmost hair of the head.

Owl
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ethome
Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada
1 posted 2011-02-21 11:36 AM

Aw Diana this is just too cute!
It's very lyrical in construction and tastefully rendered.

Love the last lines.....smile...

Take Care

Eric

oxymoron....Rap Music
bel1e
Senior Member
since 2006-07-24
Posts 1631
2 posted 2011-02-21 11:54 AM

this one, tickles, Owl~

             
OwlSA
Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa
3 posted 2011-02-21 02:44 PM

Thanks, Eric.  Glad you enjoyed it.

Thank you, Belle.  You got the heart of it.  

Owl
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