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faithmairee
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since 2011-01-05
Posts 1441
Poe Haven, USA

0 posted 2011-02-21 02:02 AM



your love is like an ocean breeze
so gently blowing across the sea
your endearing love envelopes me
while at the same time it sets me free

in the morning when i awake
i think of you with each breath i take
love is such a wonderful thing
your love has made me believe in fate

your love has touched my soul down deep
in a way i've never known before
and when you hold me in your arms
my heart escapes and embraces yours

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

© Copyright 2011 Faith Elizabeth Brigham - All Rights Reserved
katahdin
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since 2010-07-01
Posts 1196
ME. In the Shadow of the Mt.
1 posted 2011-02-21 03:01 AM


Just beautiful!
Kat >^..^<

ethome
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since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada
2 posted 2011-02-21 03:03 AM


Very romantic!!

I'm throwing a kiss to ya!

Eric

in a relationship the me becomes we.

JerryPat2
Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana
3 posted 2011-02-21 08:24 AM


Damn Eric. Beat me to that thrown kiss.

Nice work here, Faith. The desire of a distant love is both a comfort and a calming effect as you go about your days.

~ Life is sexually transmitted ~

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere
4 posted 2011-02-21 08:42 AM


Faith what a nice balance. this very loving and romantic poem as compared to the heartache of the other. I especially like the last line here.
Lori

faithmairee
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since 2011-01-05
Posts 1441
Poe Haven, USA
5 posted 2011-02-21 12:34 PM


Kat-Thank you for stopping by and reading my poem.   I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Eric-Awwww....caught that kiss...thanks...

JerryPat-Thank you.  I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Lori-Thank you for your wonderful comments.

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

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