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sweetcheeks639
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since 2011-02-17
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0 posted 2011-02-21 12:19 PM



I started this journey alone and afraid paved by the choices and mistakes that I've made
A smile on my face with a heart full of pain desperately trying to keep from going insane
Your words encourage me each one brings a smile you say 'it's your own life' and make me feel worthwile
I love the way you smile at me and when I hold your hand I know that this was meant to be... a frienship born of chance

© Copyright 2011 Laura Keating - All Rights Reserved
ethome
Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada
1 posted 2011-02-21 07:24 AM


That's very interesting Laura.
A nice way of presenting the idea with a good result.
There's always sunshine after rain....Mark Knofler


Eric

in a relationship the me becomes we.

spiked
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since 2000-01-13
Posts 873
Hammond, La USA
2 posted 2011-02-22 12:14 PM


Nice write Laura, glad to see you diving in.
easy1
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since 2010-05-22
Posts 1209
Southeastern USA
3 posted 2011-02-22 05:41 AM


Well worded.
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