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sweetcheeks639
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since 2011-02-17
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0 posted 2011-02-21 12:10 PM



I never look you in your eye because I am scared you'll see what really hides within my past that darkens the soul of me
I show you just what needs to shine to keep us moving on...I fool myself not only you by hiding all my wrongs
If I could trust you with my faults and look you in the eye..you may could help my lonely heart and rid my life of lies.

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ethome
Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada
1 posted 2011-02-21 07:38 AM


It would take a lot of courage to take that chance.
However, if it's true love, then it should work for better or worse.
Good topic.

Eric

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spiked
Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873
Hammond, La USA
2 posted 2011-02-22 12:26 PM


don't be afraid to show what you feel of think you need to hide, should be accepted for who you are and anything less is not good enough.
Rich

easy1
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since 2010-05-22
Posts 1209
Southeastern USA
3 posted 2011-02-22 04:48 AM


Hope the poet can find such a trust - just remember that he or she will have to help he or she in return, too, not always the easiest thing to do!
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