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Prats
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0 posted 2011-02-20 07:30 AM


Faulty yet faultless, that one special person is;
Reads your mind, every unsaid word and wish,
In whom you can confide your secrets and fears,
Every time you cry, s/he’ll be wiping your tears.
Nothing’s dull when you see her/his smile like the sun,
Discern the first letter of each line to know the one.

When life gives you a hundred reasons to cry, show life that you have a thousand reasons to smile... :D

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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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Fair to middlin' of nowhere
1 posted 2011-02-20 11:26 AM


I had a friend like that once, she passed in '97. Your poem brought her back. Thanks.
Lori

BluesSerenade
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By the Seaside
2 posted 2011-02-20 10:20 PM


Beautifully said and done~

True friends are far and few between, and a rare gift indeed~

Prats
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3 posted 2011-02-21 09:53 AM


Thank you for your comments...

When life gives you a hundred reasons to cry, show life that you have a thousand reasons to smile... :D

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