navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #47 » Collide
Open Poetry #47
Post A Reply Post New Topic Collide Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
gdcod3player
Member
since 2009-09-13
Posts 70
California

0 posted 2011-02-20 01:27 AM


My heart needs to be away for a while
Let our hearts collide and let them brake or be alright
Can I leave an impression with a hint of faith?
Can I allow you to kick dirt in my face?
Tell me I'll be alright
Tell me a lie
I'll love you if we just take our time
Let's let our fate bring us together
Remember how i used to be?
I was a broken heart
Now I'm strong
My heart is nothing it used to be now let me hold yours till your pain is gone.
I've loved you from the start
Now what's it going to take to get you to stay?
Lets not build our worlds apart
Let me see you like my dreams
Don't let me fall apart

© Copyright 2011 Jared Copeland - All Rights Reserved
Alison
Deputy Moderator 5 ToursDeputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!
1 posted 2011-02-20 01:58 AM


You write with so much emotion.  I think that is the main reason that I read your poetry.  Thank you for sharing pieces of 'you'.

A

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
2 posted 2011-02-22 09:14 PM


Nice writing...James
Post A Reply Post New Topic ⇧ top of page ⇧ Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.
navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #47 » Collide

Passions in Poetry | pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums | 100 Best Poems

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary