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Richy
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since 2003-05-03
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0 posted 2011-02-19 04:16 PM



Feels like an addiction
sometimes
this
need to write,
to create,
to sire something
out of
nothing.

To pull a habbit
out of a
rat
or something
like that
or was that
a cat
and a hat
no wait
thats a whole
different saying
or poem I should say
from that lawyer fellah
or was it a
doctor,
doctor salt, was it,
ahh salt n peppa
maybe it twas
one of their
lyrics,
oh gosh,
my muse is acting up
again,
muse,
music,
kind of the same,
but different,
I love saying that,
my muse, makes me
ponder,
bout ponds
O’er yonder,
it makes me
contemplate
over my contempt
of all things
late,
Lets pause for a moment
on that shall we
and just
ruminate,
about the room we have to
be in
for that meeting
at eight,
I know,
sometimes I’m as
silly
as putty
on the bottom shelf,
of a window,
which i need to
close right now
because the wind
just blew in
and made me say,
oh,
oh gosh, see
there i go
again
hey, i cant help it
if some words are confusing
I didnt make up
the got gang things
but then,
just thinking about again, again
every word i do learn to
twist
and bend
is actually
a gain, in my vocabulary,
isn’t that
insane,
okay now just hang one potten cicking
minute
how come a person can be
sane
but if he’s not sane, he’s insane,
you know what,
you’re either in or you’re out
there’s no middle coffee grounds here
on the subject,
I know,
I’m being a little, inane again
but thats just something i cant feign
its the main bane of my brain
that i cant explain
but i am trying my best to restrain
or at least maintain
so that i can refrain
from being a pain
or a strain
on my neck with the vein
that I craned
on the weather vane
while i ate chow mein  
and quiche lorraine
which i thought was bavarian
but it wasn’t germaine
and a cesar salad
with hearts of
romaine,
as I drank
champagne
in the rain
in the fast lane
of the food chain
reading mark twain
and listening to
the lady in spain
with jane
who like white bread
is plain
but thats okay
because I’m, extra nutty
and that well…
I will not maybe, always, never, sometimes,
restrain.

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faithmairee
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since 2011-01-05
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Poe Haven, USA
1 posted 2011-02-19 05:44 PM


WOW...this is brilliant, so cleverly composed...too cool!

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

Richy
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2 posted 2011-02-19 06:30 PM


Haha thanks Faith, just my mind run amuck

Richard

faithmairee
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3 posted 2011-02-19 07:10 PM


my pleasure...it made for a captivating poem

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

Nareena
Member
since 2011-02-17
Posts 51
BC, Canada
4 posted 2011-02-19 11:34 PM


all the rhyming made my eyes go crossed hehe. Love it!
OwlSA
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since 2005-11-07
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Durban, South Africa
5 posted 2011-02-20 12:21 PM


This was fun.  Nuts are nice.  I find sane people difficult to understand.

Owl

Richy
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6 posted 2011-02-20 01:16 AM



Nareena, I know, me too, I'll tell you though, this way it keeps my students in check, they can't tell which one I'm looking at haha.

You're a breath of fresh air dear friend, I'm glad you're here

Richard

Richy
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7 posted 2011-02-20 01:18 AM



Diana, haha oh my that was funny, yes, me too as well, some people even say that I am nuttier then squirrel poo... oh my god lol.

Thanks for the kind words
Richard

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