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Sunshine
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Listening to every heart

0 posted 2011-02-19 01:53 PM



Pending Deafness

Shall I be as Beethoven
and suffer the loudness of quiet ~
to rely solely
on tonal qualities
that tremor through floorboards
and feel the disquiet
of one's touch
in their nervousness
of this
affliction?

A child wonders at blindness
& plays such games of bluff
enough so to be glad
to remove the folds of cloth
from face &
rejoice
in the light.

There, too, to play in water
& sea foam and know
(only) momentarily
the closed hush of
water's muffled qualities,
only to spring forth & up
&
relish the cry of the gull
or sound of bluejay, scolding.

To know deafness
may be coming
one does hidden things ~
listens carefully to all words
and measures with fluttering
fingertips
the beating heart, the child's whisper,
the cry of babes,
even a dial tone
&
most certainly,
a lover's voice.

Then quietly, one prays
that this pending deafness
is a long time
coming.

~*~


©Karilea Rilling Jungel
Repost from
24 September, 2000
Revised slightly 2011




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Spiros Zafiris
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1 posted 2011-02-19 02:15 PM


.very engaging poem, Karilea..indeed
if deafness is to come, may it be
far, far, far, away..>>spiros

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2 posted 2011-02-19 02:34 PM


This is brilliant.  I am keeping it.  Thank you so much for sharing this poem with us again.

I am in awe (truly).

Love,
A

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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3 posted 2011-02-19 06:44 PM


Yes ma'am thank you for sharing it
faithmairee
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4 posted 2011-02-19 08:12 PM


engaging...yes...brilliant...yes...and so beautifully expressed...truly excellent.

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

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