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faithmairee
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since 2011-01-05
Posts 1441
Poe Haven, USA

0 posted 2011-02-16 04:16 PM



no one knows
the pain i hide
down-hearted
dumbfounded
numb to life
no, nothing
seems right
i'm losing
my grip
i can't see
the light
reality bites

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

© Copyright 2011 Faith Elizabeth Brigham - All Rights Reserved
Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere
1 posted 2011-02-16 06:48 PM


Bite it does and bite again it will. But not for always and forever, it just feels that way. Hang in there.
Lori

Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354
Listening to every heart
2 posted 2011-02-16 07:08 PM


This hurts.

This helps...


faithmairee
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since 2011-01-05
Posts 1441
Poe Haven, USA
3 posted 2011-02-16 08:56 PM


Lori-Thank you, my friend.  I appreciate your kind words

Sunshine-thanks, it does help

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

JerryPat2
Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana
4 posted 2011-02-16 09:28 PM


Start biting it back, Faith.

~~ All those who believe in telekinesis, raise my hand ~~

Nareena
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since 2011-02-17
Posts 51
BC, Canada
5 posted 2011-02-17 02:17 PM


This could have described me a few years ago. I'm still not fully healed. Bite back
faithmairee
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since 2011-01-05
Posts 1441
Poe Haven, USA
6 posted 2011-02-18 11:20 AM


JerryPat-Bite I will!

Nareena-Welcome to PIP.  Thanks for reading and commenting on my poem.

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549
By the Seaside
7 posted 2011-02-18 06:51 PM


Love your title Faith.

It's true,  very few people get that up close and personal to feel our heartache.

Good stuff~

faithmairee
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since 2011-01-05
Posts 1441
Poe Haven, USA
8 posted 2011-02-18 07:49 PM


BluesSerenade-Thank you for your wonderful remarks.  I appreciate them so much.

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

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