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faithmairee
Senior Member

since 2011-01-05

Posts 1441
Poe Haven, USA

0 posted 2011-02-16 04:09 PM

somewhere among the
cinders and the ashes
you will find
what's left of my heart
after i got burned by you

one day i'll
learn to aim higher
with my choice in men
but right now
i'm still smoldering

when the smoke's gone
and i'm not feeling
quite so vulnerable i may
give love another shot

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

1 posted 2011-02-16 06:25 PM

Wise words m'friend. Go slow.
Lori

faithmairee
Senior Member

since 2011-01-05

Posts 1441
Poe Haven, USA

2 posted 2011-02-16 08:58 PM

Thank you for being here, my friend.

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

3 posted 2011-02-16 09:30 PM

Ditto's what Lori said.

~~ All those who believe in telekinesis, raise my hand ~~

steavenr
Member Elite

since 2003-11-17

Posts 4058

4 posted 2011-02-16 10:34 PM

well said...and wise...good write

Richy
Member Elite

since 2003-05-03

Posts 3050

5 posted 2011-02-17 03:49 AM

As far as arrows are concerned, it sounds like if you saw this guy again, that you would aim and shoot at him in a... lower postition... !

The heart can burn, but just like forging a sword, it only gets harder, and with a sharper edge.

Very nicely done Faith

Richard

Misty Lilacs
Senior Member

since 2005-11-15

Posts 1060
White Birch Forest

6 posted 2011-02-17 11:19 AM

Very good advice my friend!

ooxx Marti

I do the MS Walk everyday!!

faithmairee
Senior Member

since 2011-01-05

Posts 1441
Poe Haven, USA

7 posted 2011-02-18 11:27 AM

Thanks so much everyone for your wonderful comments.

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

8 posted 2011-02-20 10:16 PM

You convey such raw emotion.

This rocks!!

faithmairee
Senior Member

since 2011-01-05

Posts 1441
Poe Haven, USA

9 posted 2011-02-20 10:37 PM

Thank you so much for your wonderful remarks. I'm honored by them.

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

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