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Open Poetry #47
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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2011-02-15 05:54 PM


Sweet Chariot


I went down that long lonely road

hoping I wouldn't have to go all the way,

but dam...it I did.

Swing low sweet chariot,

come forth and carry

my broken heart away.


JamesLee
10February
2011
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Sunshine
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1 posted 2011-02-15 08:09 PM

Oh James...

this one tugs.
faithmairee
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2 posted 2011-02-15 08:44 PM

this is sad but nicely written....tug, it does!

There must be a poem in here somewhere.
bel1e
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3 posted 2011-02-15 09:09 PM

very well penned, James !

             
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