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graying1
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since 2011-02-09
Posts 53
The Commonwealth of VA

0 posted 2011-02-15 05:30 AM


Didn’t I just caulk that window
It was yesterday or two years ago,
But through it the wind will blow
Especially when the trees
Have no leaves
To slow the blow.

Everyday I find something new
Something to redo
To fix or replace out or in
Things to do never end
In this old home of mine

Wouldn’t have it any other way



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Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere
1 posted 2011-02-15 08:43 AM


I love old house, they have so much personality! Enjoyed this much Peter.
Lori

bel1e
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since 2006-07-24
Posts 1631

2 posted 2011-02-15 10:02 AM


very nicely penned, gray1

             

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa
3 posted 2011-02-15 10:32 AM


I love this, Peter.  My house is the same, and I love it passionately too, but I have to wait until I can afford somebody else to do the fixing.

Owl

easy1
Senior Member
since 2010-05-22
Posts 1209
Southeastern USA
4 posted 2011-02-15 12:05 PM


Ah, an old house in the sticks. Not to be confused with the bat-cave... Nicely penned!
Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California
5 posted 2011-02-18 01:48 PM


Home is our sanctuary. I am always having to fix something too but "I wouldn't have it any other way."
BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549
By the Seaside
6 posted 2011-02-18 06:28 PM


  sweet...home sweet home~
The Lady
Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634
The Southwest
7 posted 2011-02-19 12:10 PM




new houses have no soul

I love this Peter.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
8 posted 2011-02-19 12:26 PM


seems like I'm feeling the same way lately


Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354
Listening to every heart
9 posted 2011-02-19 10:09 AM


Peter, this snapshot of your home
made me smile...I felt like a
welcomed visitor come over for
coffee.

Of course, I brought chewy oatmeal
cranberry cookies with me.


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