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Open Poetry #47

I Saw You ...

Rula
New Member

since 2011-02-14

Posts 5

0 posted 2011-02-15 02:21 AM

I saw YOU this morning going to school
Holding that heavy back-bag ..
So sleepily and weakly your steps went
Towards unknowndark crack

I saw YOU this morning holding your infant and hurry
How can I be there with the one that I carry
What shall I cook when I go home?
Who some of my duties can burry?

I saw YOU this morning trying to startyour car
It was refusing to go..
Is it really that it was cold out there or
maybe it needed a spare part.

I saw YOU going to the university this morning
Holding a burden on there
Holding some hope there inside the books
And better holdinga better future in heart.

I saw that kid
I saw that woman
I saw the Man
I saw them all
But I rarely saw any
Because
I saw all while I was going no where

faithmairee
Senior Member

since 2011-01-05

Posts 1441
Poe Haven, USA

1 posted 2011-02-15 06:11 AM

Welcome to PIP. I hope you enjoy it here. Enjoyed your poem and am looking forward to reading more from you.

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

2 posted 2011-02-16 06:43 AM

just by noticing~~ is a "good" thing.

I'vr felt like I am going nowwhere before and probably will again.

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