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nakdthoughts
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0 posted 2011-02-14 03:26 PM


Angels in Disguise


In the quiet I am faceless,
mourning the deaths,
black cloth covering,
no other side to see.
Blinded by the thoughts
that delve into reasoning.
Eyes, impaired, no longer linger in blue,
but see only shadows, in outlines stilled.

In the quiet I am fearless,
worries pressed behind,
heart no longer raging,
the color red meaningless,
remembering the words
"be careful what you wish for",
now understanding why Alice and Ollyne
surface to hold my hands
and walk me through it, once again.

In the quiet, they are my angels in disguise,
and I borrow my strength from them
and will surrender to them and no other
on Valentines Day, the three of us
not as alone, as I felt yesterday.


M (redone)
"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)


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Sunshine
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1 posted 2011-02-14 03:47 PM


Aha...and then there was
one, left standing,
stronger, wiser,
ever giving.




nakdthoughts
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2 posted 2011-02-14 03:49 PM


sighing~ while trying to figure out how to get all my words out of the blue and into a  flashdrive for safe-keeping as I try to update my outdated technological life

hugs
M

JerryPat2
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3 posted 2011-02-14 09:07 PM


Ah, Alice and Ollyne. There for you. Friends always are. Nice work.

~~ All those who believe in telekinesis, raise my hand ~~

nakdthoughts
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4 posted 2011-02-14 10:02 PM


JP, Alicethruglass and Lady Ollyne (2 other pip names )
Alicethruglass
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5 posted 2011-02-14 10:36 PM






The Glass of Time



I have kissed the face behind the mirror, a thousand times or more.
On the other side you have wiped my tears, three years ago, before.
Through this glass I can see your form, reaching a hand to me.
I asked for love and was given you, a reflection for Alice to see.

Opaque, you were in the Land Between, my glass of time, in touch.
A hopefulness, to know of warmth, inspiring words of such.
Your shadow played its hidden game, to tender me in tease.
You leave behind in window's fog, "I Love You" lettered with ease.

Each morning's rise brings me to you, backed in silvered glaze.
Rainbow streaks across the room as sun meets misted haze.
Colored you to soften wounds when stepped through cracks in time.
I asked for love and was given you,  a rainbow hued in rhyme.

The land between belongs to one, no other can I embrace .
I end my days in The Glass of Time, in kiss of the mirrored face.

~A~



bel1e
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6 posted 2011-02-15 10:01 AM


I think I heard music in this~~~ niiice~  

             

nakdthoughts
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7 posted 2011-02-16 06:39 AM


bel1e, it's nice to see you again, Thank you.

M

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