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Misty Lilacs
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0 posted 2011-02-13 11:29 AM






sun rising


dawn’s bright rising sun
glitters on last night’s fresh snow
the whole world dances



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faithmairee
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1 posted 2011-02-13 11:42 AM


Simply beautiful...the picture and poem are a perfect match...wonderful poem here

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

JerryPat2
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2 posted 2011-02-13 11:54 AM


Nice work. Even without the photo II was there.

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Anoo
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3 posted 2011-02-13 12:11 PM


Like a beautiful illustration. I enjoyed it much.
Anoo

Misty Lilacs
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4 posted 2011-02-13 12:43 PM


Thank you faithmairee! I took the picture out my kitchen window yesterday morning. I love to be up and watch the sunrise!

JerryPat2, I appreciate your comment.

Anoo, thank you kindly. I don't think I've seen you here before. Are you brand new?

love to all, Marti

I do the MS Walk everyday!!

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5 posted 2011-02-13 02:44 PM


Now that's what I call a beautiful Haiku.
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6 posted 2011-02-13 02:52 PM


You are sure good at these Marti.  By the way, you can ask Nan I did see a sunrise ONCE!
Misty Lilacs
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7 posted 2011-02-13 02:52 PM


Ida, you are so sweet. Thank you so much. I took the picture out my kitchen window. I love the sunrise.

ooxx  Marti

I do the MS Walk everyday!!

Misty Lilacs
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8 posted 2011-02-13 03:15 PM


Sharon, brain can barely do these. It takes me forever to write one. I can't write long poems anymore. Cognitive issues drive me nuts! Damn MS!!

love ya, Marti

I do the MS Walk everyday!!

Honeybunch
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9 posted 2011-02-14 10:58 AM


Beautiful picture and words!
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10 posted 2011-02-14 02:42 PM


Misty...awesome!


Misty Lilacs
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11 posted 2011-02-14 02:59 PM


Honey, thank you. My favorite part of the day is watching the sun rise.

Think it means Spring is coming?

ooxx  Marti

I do the MS Walk everyday!!

Misty Lilacs
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12 posted 2011-02-14 03:00 PM


Karilea, thank you. I can't wait for that sun to be warm and melt many feet of snow!

ooxx  Marti

I do the MS Walk everyday!!

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