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s1nfully_1nn0c3nt
Senior Member

since 2003-10-26

Posts 1105
Watertown, NY

0 posted 2011-02-13 10:24 AM

Where have you gone?
left me here alone
unwilling to believe-
promises made
unable to trust-
any truths
theres are no more
sparkles in my eyes
I've caught a cold
you see, theres ice
around my heart
within my soul
I need you now
more than ever. So...
where have you gone?
were you even here?
how do I keep
going on without you

My dearest
Hope and
Faith

-Trina
Better to write for yourself and have no public, than to write for the public and have no self.

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

1 posted 2011-02-13 11:08 AM

Quite a call for reconciliation. It is a horrible, sometimes mind-blowing thing to be shut out like this poem describes. Sometimes we don't know how we are going to be able to get through it, but we do, and are usually a better person after having survived.

~~ All those who believe in telekinesis, raise my hand ~~

faithmairee
Senior Member

since 2011-01-05

Posts 1441
Poe Haven, USA

2 posted 2011-02-13 11:29 AM

a sad and very moving poem...

i enjoyed your poem very much

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

3 posted 2011-02-13 12:04 PM

Yep, moments without hope and faith are like having a cell phone in a dead zone.
Enjoyed this
Lori

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

4 posted 2011-02-13 12:38 PM

Very sad but delivers the mood very very well.
Such is life sometimes....sigh..

Eric

in a relationship the me becomes we.

Spiros Zafiris
Senior Member

since 2002-10-20

Posts 982
Canada

5 posted 2011-02-13 09:17 PM

.. emotion-full..but it flows and reaches
and poetry-lovers understand and appreciate

.>>spiros
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s1nfully_1nn0c3nt
Senior Member

since 2003-10-26

Posts 1105
Watertown, NY

6 posted 2011-02-16 08:08 AM

Thanx. I appreciate the comments. Just got off from my 12hr shift so I'll return the favor soon.

-Trina
Better to write for yourself and have no public, than to write for the public and have no self.

Earl Brinkman
Senior Member

since 2010-03-03

Posts 1183
Osaka, Japan

7 posted 2011-02-16 06:52 PM

It is good to read your work again.

s1nfully_1nn0c3nt
Senior Member

since 2003-10-26

Posts 1105
Watertown, NY

8 posted 2011-02-17 08:42 AM

Aww Thanx Earl, I always look forward to hearing from you

I have a job now ha. so I dont have much time to write, but I write when I can.

-Trina
Better to write for yourself and have no public, than to write for the public and have no self.

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