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OwlSA
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0 posted 2011-02-13 03:50 AM



WHY THE SKY IS BLUE
11 February 2011

I won’t tell you in Laboratory Logic.
I will sing you in Birdsong;
I will lift you in Ecstasy;
I will whisper you in Joy;
I will fly you in Freedom;

The sky is blue
because blue is the colour of music and magic and mystery;
because blue spreads our wings and lifts us up;
because blue drives away the blues and wraps us in Infinity;
because blue is further than blue than blue than blue.
The sky is blue
because we want it so.

Owl

© Copyright 2011 Diana van den Berg - All Rights Reserved
graying1
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1 posted 2011-02-13 05:50 AM


Good poem, sound argument
Bastet
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2 posted 2011-02-13 06:11 AM


Beautiful. The repetition gives your poem a musical feeling. Color imagery is well done. A pleasure to read.
OwlSA
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3 posted 2011-02-13 06:42 AM


Thanks, Peter.  I am glad you think so.

Thank you, Bastet, for your kind words.

Owl

ethome
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4 posted 2011-02-13 12:41 PM


Yep, that's why it's blue cause it's so beautiful that way and you're right we want it so.

I love it when they smile at you.

Eric

in a relationship the me becomes we.

faithmairee
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5 posted 2011-02-13 02:10 PM


that is why i love blue...yes, i see it now...beuatifully written as always

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

2islander2
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6 posted 2011-02-13 02:12 PM


hello Diana, I adore the poem, its beauty and its message so accurate, are we willing ? that world, that sky are like us and we are surely a part of them...

Thanks for sharing beauty and poetry.

yann

OwlSA
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7 posted 2011-02-13 05:26 PM


Thank you, Eric.  I always love your responses.

Thank you, Faith.  I am glad it brought that to you.

Thank you, Yann for your kind and beautiful response.  Oh yes, you are SO right.  We are all part of Nature and each other.  Namaste.

Owl

steavenr
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8 posted 2011-02-14 07:35 PM


what a striking way to say, because it is... a true pleasure to read (and the best thing is that it actually makes sense)
Sunshine
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9 posted 2011-02-14 07:41 PM


Magic,

being key.




bel1e
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10 posted 2011-02-15 10:32 AM


love how you soar, Owl~

             

OwlSA
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11 posted 2011-02-15 10:48 AM


Thanks, Steaven.  I am glad you enjoyed it so much.

Thank you, Karilea.  Smiles.

Owl

OwlSA
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12 posted 2011-02-17 01:24 PM


Thank you, Belle.  

Owl  

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