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Spiros Zafiris
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0 posted 2011-02-12 05:58 PM


calm befriended,
a symphony of petals
fans our capes
and our bemused smiles
welcome this garden sublime
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serenity blaze
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1 posted 2011-02-12 06:31 PM


A guided meditation for me...

such good medicine! I thank you.

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
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2 posted 2011-02-12 06:52 PM


A sublime garden is always in need of visitors from an enlightened way. Thank you for the invitation.

~ There's nothing worse than desiring more than you are desired.--Justine Cook / "Portrait" ~

s1nfully_1nn0c3nt
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3 posted 2011-02-12 08:23 PM


Lovely, I always enjoy your Tankas.

-Trina
Better to write for yourself and have no public, than to write for the public and have no self.

Spiros Zafiris
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4 posted 2011-02-12 09:13 PM


..serenity blaze, Jerry, and Trina..>>thanks
so much, all of you, for your marvelous
comments..>>spiros
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OwlSA
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5 posted 2011-02-13 03:16 AM


Oh, so much more even than WB Yeats’ “where peace comes dropping slow”!  Don’t want to stop meandering amongst the flowers . . .

Owl

steavenr
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6 posted 2011-02-14 07:25 PM


"a symphony of petals fans our capes"  I love the phrasing in this...nice
Sunshine
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7 posted 2011-02-14 09:12 PM


Your tankas
and haikus
always lend themselves
to magic
and more.


Spiros Zafiris
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8 posted 2011-02-14 11:25 PM


..Owl, steavenr, and Sunshine..>>your delightful comments are truly encouraging;
thanks..>>spiros

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