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faithmairee
Senior Member
since 2011-01-05
Posts 1441
Poe Haven, USA

0 posted 2011-02-12 12:06 PM



Tonight I sit alone
in a bar in Paris
watching you
watching me
as you sip
your drink
I've seen
you here before
waited for you
to strike up
a conversation

I won't make
the first move
it's just not me
but i have thought
about it
more than once
i blame that
on Paris
the city of light
it always tempts
the romantic
side of me

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

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Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere
1 posted 2011-02-12 07:59 AM


Paris? wow,well at least what happens in Paris stays in Paris
Lori

JerryPat2
Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana
2 posted 2011-02-12 08:12 AM


Haha! Laughing at Lori's comment. Can't help it, I have nothing more to say.

~ There's nothing worse than desiring more than you are desired.--Justine Cook / "Portrait" ~

faithmairee
Senior Member
since 2011-01-05
Posts 1441
Poe Haven, USA
3 posted 2011-02-13 12:42 PM


Lori-Thanks for your comments

JerryPat-Not sure how to take that.  Well, whatever.

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

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