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Open Poetry #47

The Sky

ken206573
Member

since 2008-10-14

Posts 487

0 posted 2011-02-10 07:08 PM

bellowed
to me as I dreamed
for snow or
was I dreaming
about you. The sun
blinded me like
your bright
smile or was it
your eyes that
had me. The sky
became covered in
clouds, snow fell
softly on my lips
so sweet, fresh
and soft like
you. I missed
the days we
had under the
sky, but now your
far from me.
Under some
unknown sky with
clear view of
the distance with
another. So let
me stay under this
clouded sky, the snow
and let our sky
hide until my heart
is cleared from
this cold front
you left
it in.

faithmairee
Senior Member

since 2011-01-05

Posts 1441
Poe Haven, USA

1 posted 2011-02-11 12:26 PM

just lovely...i enjoyed this a lot...i especially like the ending...

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

Rainbowdust
Member

since 2002-12-05

Posts 320
Sydney, Australia

2 posted 2011-02-14 04:28 AM

Beautiful Ken! I really enjoyed the rhythm of this.

The soul would have no rainbows, had the eyes no tears.

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