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Heartsleeve Relinquished
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Heartsleeve Relinquished |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere 
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Heartsleeve relinquished her remaining resolve around her ankles Stepping out of her apprehensions long enough to feel unfettered she made the mirror lie once more to the smooth of her soft scented skin She fell into her reflection seeing more than met her eyes in her imagination she fingered her frustration white knuckled on the wall LGR©2/10/11 |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Whoa! Uh, I mean, giddy-up-go, Lori. When you decide to "come out," you do it in gr-a-a-a-nd style. Fun-tas-tick play on words here. Stand. Clap. Clap. Take a bow, or curtsy, whatever floats yer boat. ~ Some people are like a Slinky -- not really good for anything -- but you still can't help but smile when you shove them down the stairs. ~ |
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bel1e Senior Member
since 2006-07-24
Posts 1631 |
ohhhhh my~*~*~*~ |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
There's a lot more here than first meets the eye. Well done! |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Good one, Lori! |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Jerry, bel1e and Sunshine, Thanks for giving this piece your attention. It is not my usual fare so I'm glad you could appreciate it. Lori |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Thanks Honeybunch! Lori |
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