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always4real Junior Member
since 2011-01-22
Posts 31A yankee that lives in NC |
Do you know? As tears fall down my face I wonder do you really know me… Do you know that I love to dance? Dance to the beat of my dreams… Of Our dreams That I love to question the wonders of the world? Questioning everything, From the color of the sky to the man in the clouds That I love to love YOU Do you know that I have many fears? Every time you raise your voice… I fear It will not end well… Smack… Boom… This is what I fear… I was trained to do… Just that "Happiness is a state of your own mind!" |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
I like this. Really deep truths here. Lori |
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faithmairee Senior Member
since 2011-01-05
Posts 1441Poe Haven, USA |
i agree with, Lori about the thruth in this one...i felt the raw emotion, too...i love how you ended the poem...it was great  There must be a poem in here somewhere. |
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