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Huan Yi
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0 posted 2011-02-10 08:15 AM


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So crows not wake her
With the sun at dawn
A flight of sparrows


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easy1
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1 posted 2011-02-11 04:55 AM


Excellently succinct.
2islander2
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by the sea
2 posted 2011-02-11 10:50 AM


enjoyed .

yann

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3 posted 2011-02-11 09:24 PM


and one sees the
dappling shadows
at dawn...


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