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JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

0 posted 2011-02-10 06:52 AM

The traveler screamed.
Then he ran and ran and ran.
The road became as straight as it had been crooked before.
Still . . . he could not escape from himself.
He understood that.
The woman thing was gone,
but it still lived as surely as he took the next gasping breath,
it did so because it was him with all the warts.
A forlorn, solitary howl interrupted the traveler's perverse musings.
Such a sad and lonesome wail it could only come from a hound.
The traveler took it as a warning.
A cautionary howl directed at the stranger
who walked among the remnants
and distasteful ingredients which make up mankind.
Plop. Plop. Plop.
One foot in front of the other.
It should be night.
It is not.
It is twilight.
He needed to find . . . Shelter.

Why?

He startled himself with his audible question.
He needed shelter because he was,
or would soon be, cold.
Shelter to hide his nakedness.
He was ashamed of his slightly rounded stomach,
his old man sagging breasts;
his rapidly receding penis.
Shelter to hide his imperfections.
Oh, my.
The howling hound was there with him,
pressing his cold, wet nose against his bare leg.
Oh, my.
The hound walked ahead of him.
He was,
of course, not a hound.
A beast though.
He was that.
A beast that spoke.

I am here to take you.

The traveler did not see the beast's mouth move when it talked.

Where?

"Follow me."
It began to lope.
The traveler did not run after it.
Soon the hound was out of sight.
The traveler continued walking.
What else was he to do?
There was no where else to go.
Each step he took he was met with Ethereal Images from his past.
Only they were not really ghost-like,
they were eerily delicate real matter.
These Ethereal Images could touch and feel and bleed.
They sobbed and screamed into his face angry words,
screeches and clawed his back and front side
and attacked his genitals,
especially his genitals.
He could not defend himself,
for without him being aware,
his arms had fallen from his body.
There was no blood.
It had not hurt.
Was he at the mercy of his past sins?
Were they infiltrating themselves into the very pores of his being?
He walked, and as he did so he decided to forgive his persecutors
even though it seemed they were holding onto their grudges.

Forgive them for they know not what they do.

Actually, he believed they did know what they were doing
He knew most of them.
His Mother.
She was the worst.
Blaming him.
For everything.
She was the worst.
Old Girlfriends.
Old Wives.
Vicious.
Unrelenting in their desire to hurt.
Payback is . . . Toughtittie . . .
Reap what you sow . . .
Yes . . .
What goes around . . .
All That Jazz!
He was being hit and poked, jabbed with sharp fingernails,
bitten with filed-down teeth and kicked,
thought he would surely fall to the earth and be beaten until he died but . . .
they stopped.
His Mother's chest burst open,
her heart fairly flew from her bosom onto the ground and split into.
Broken Heart.
The rest did the same.
Everyone he had known,
everyone he guessed he had hurt
in ways he could not remember now,
lost their hearts and minds and love and joy,
all to be strewn alongside the dusty road the traveler walked.
Now he understood.

~ Some people are like a Slinky -- not really good for anything -- but you still can't help but smile when you shove them down the stairs. ~

[This message has been edited by JerryPat2 (02-10-2011 08:25 AM).]

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

1 posted 2011-02-10 08:16 AM

Sounds like hell to me Jerry..literally not figuratively. I'm lovin' this. You give me a lot to ponder with these pieces.
Lori

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

2 posted 2011-02-10 08:26 AM

I am glad you are liking this little exercise, Lori. Thank you much.

~ Some people are like a Slinky -- not really good for anything -- but you still can't help but smile when you shove them down the stairs. ~

faithmairee
Senior Member

since 2011-01-05

Posts 1441
Poe Haven, USA

3 posted 2011-02-11 12:47 PM

intriguing story...felt like hell to me too...whew! i see there's more of this eery tale

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

4 posted 2011-02-11 06:16 AM

Yes, one more. Thanks, Faith.

~ Some people are like a Slinky -- not really good for anything -- but you still can't help but smile when you shove them down the stairs. ~

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