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JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2011-02-09 06:12 PM


Victoria's Secret Revealed

Yes I have a secret
a secret I will be
revealing to you soon,
very soon, just as soon
as you touch my heart.
Can I trust you,
do I feel comfortable with you,
do I want you to
embrace me in your arms,
win my heart
with the softness of your heart,
place kisses upon my lips,
making my lips
cry out for more,
for if I do, I will
reveal my secret to you.
Come closer,
so close that I can
whisper my secret in your ear,
softly I will whisper the words
that only you can hear,
"Love me, for everything I am
will be yours my dear."

Love me, Victoria.

JamesLee
07February
2011





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faithmairee
Senior Member
since 2011-01-05
Posts 1441
Poe Haven, USA
1 posted 2011-02-09 09:33 PM


nice and romantic...i enjoyed this one a lot

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

2islander2
Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825
by the sea
2 posted 2011-02-11 10:58 AM


so tender and full of romance...Thanks for the very enjoyable read.

yann

Nareena
Member
since 2011-02-17
Posts 51
BC, Canada
3 posted 2011-02-17 01:09 AM


I love this! Makes me wish my hubby would write to me like this hehe. Enjoyed, thanks for the read
s1nfully_1nn0c3nt
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since 2003-10-26
Posts 1105
Watertown, NY
4 posted 2011-02-17 08:44 AM


So sweet. Enjoyed.

-Trina
Better to write for yourself and have no public, than to write for the public and have no self.

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