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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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since 2009-10-10
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Fair to middlin' of nowhere

0 posted 2011-02-09 03:50 PM


Heartsleeve
peeled off her sensibles
and her
bashful unabashed
skinny dipped
in the big blue sea
LGR(C)2/9/11


[This message has been edited by Lori Grosser Rhoden (02-09-2011 04:43 PM).]

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JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana
1 posted 2011-02-09 04:26 PM


And here you are, Lori, peeling off your sensibles along with your bashful, unabashed
skinny and dipping along in the big blue sea of Passions. Gotta love it!!!

~ Some people are like a Slinky -- not really good for anything -- but you still can't help but smile when you shove them down the stairs. ~

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere
2 posted 2011-02-09 04:48 PM


Well you know those darn unabashed, whadaya gonna do? They kinda gotta mind of their own, know what I mean?
Lori

faithmairee
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since 2011-01-05
Posts 1441
Poe Haven, USA
3 posted 2011-02-09 05:32 PM


cool poem...i really like it

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
4 posted 2011-02-09 06:14 PM


Enjoyed...James
bel1e
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since 2006-07-24
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5 posted 2011-02-09 06:19 PM


gotta love skinny dipping!  

             

graying1
Member
since 2011-02-09
Posts 53
The Commonwealth of VA
6 posted 2011-02-10 06:19 AM


Enjoyed
but
at my age it's better to be just a
spectator sport.

PS

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere
7 posted 2011-02-10 09:27 AM


Thanks Faith! Glad you are here.

-----------------------------------------
Thanks James
_________________________________________
bel1e- yes the waters are warm here
________________________________________
Gray 1- I'm no spring chicken either so there is no real water involved...just alluding to the blue pages of pip. Thanks for checking me out,glad you enjoyed!

Lori

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