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Open Poetry #47

The Late Hour

Huan Yi
Member Ascendant

since 2004-10-12

Posts 6688
Waukegan

0 posted 2011-02-09 11:57 AM

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Let it go

It is the late hour
The sun’s gone down
And the moon already
Is rising in the east

There is deep snow
On the blue starlit fields
Yet your rooms are warm
And there are no needs

So she still now
Comes occasionally
As always uninvited
With a little time
And patience
Again she will disappear

Don’t encourage her
With a sadness
To match her own

Let evening come
And close the door

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OwlSA
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-11-07

Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa

1 posted 2011-02-09 12:56 PM

John, this is sensitively secret and very, very beautiful. I lost myself in it and didn't want to get out of it.

Owl

Misty Lilacs
Senior Member

since 2005-11-15

Posts 1060
White Birch Forest

2 posted 2011-02-09 02:20 PM

I loved this. It is spectacular!

ooxx Marti

I do the <b>MS Walk</b>everyday!!

steavenr
Member Elite

since 2003-11-17

Posts 4058

3 posted 2011-02-09 03:30 PM

I loved this...your ending is amazing!

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