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Open Poetry #47

These Demons Inside of Me

Joshkt
Junior Member

since 2011-02-09

Posts 12

0 posted 2011-02-09 08:49 AM

Could this be really me
Prettending just to dream
not gonna realize that this actuality
is my reality that the factuality
of my situation rushes to my head
Cant stop thinking of what they saidd
When im laying in my bed
those thoughts start swirling through my head
Dont know how to answer
Just let em talk
Telling myself this is diffferent
then where I've been before
They're convincing never relenting
Keep pushing inside my head
Telling me to do it
Never gonna do it
Oh god dont let me do it.
Gonna turn this thing around
Get my feet back on the ground
Never let them get me down
Theres nothing now that can tear me down
I feel like a loner out there in the crowd
Trying to make a sound that nobody hears
Learing toward that one situation
Never going back to that old apparation
Tired of this gonna start the obliteration
of my oldself the new ones coming out
No ones ever seen him before
Except the ones that really new me before
I turned into a monster let them get the best of me
They had a control over me
They wouldnt let me be
These demons inside of me.

Thank you for your time.

Sunshine

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1 posted 2011-02-09 10:11 AM

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faithmairee
Senior Member

since 2011-01-05

Posts 1441
Poe Haven, USA

2 posted 2011-02-09 10:24 AM

Welcome to the blue room. Enjoyed your poem very much and I'm looking forward to reading more of your work.

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

latearrival
Member Ascendant

since 2003-03-21

Posts 5499
Florida

3 posted 2011-02-09 01:18 PM

You are very welcome here. Read and write as it is meant to be. latearrival

Joshkt
Junior Member

since 2011-02-09

Posts 12

4 posted 2011-02-09 03:28 PM

Thanks for the replies

and I put two of my other poems on already I have more too come and I am writing every night

I'm excited to be here!

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

5 posted 2011-02-11 01:35 AM

Welcome Joshkt. Enjoyed your first post.
Ida

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